Sexual lord. Without the sexual. And the lord.
Age 29, Male
Proletarian
Meditation on Cocaine
Portugal
Joined on 5/18/09
Lamar537 2009-07-21 21:53:08
Very good, although I'd just like to say use proper words. For example ; "He taked his sword and his bill in vain" Use took instead of taked, which isn't a real word. 9/10 though, good job.
TheDaemonicPoet 2009-07-21 21:53:08
Thank you. I'll post another poem/lyric in a while.
Natick 2009-07-23 18:14:53
Are you an emo?
TheDaemonicPoet 2009-07-23 18:14:53
Grunge/Metalhead... if you say I am emo ok... :( You're so boring.
Lamar537
Very good, although I'd just like to say use proper words. For example ; "He taked his sword and his bill in vain"
Use took instead of taked, which isn't a real word. 9/10 though, good job.
TheDaemonicPoet
Thank you. I'll post another poem/lyric in a while.