Butterfly upon the eye...

When the night fall
I will kill you all
But my desires seem to be not so true
And they end repressed by you

I just want to slice my eyes
With a butterfly knife
My head still lies
The pain still not justify suicide
I scorch with fire every second of your life
Darkness fall over earth
What can I do
My guns are buried in my mind
And I just... lost it!

Gore! Gore!
Sacrifice the whore!
Gore! Gore!
I want some more...

Surrounded by
The enemies of the accomplishment
The enemies of what should safely be done...
The enemies of...
Of the reality!
And I shall commit...
...commit suicide!
But I kill in despair!
In... stead...

I! just want! to...
slice, my eyes!
With a butterfly knife!
And my mind, is full of
Diabolic thoughts
Of terrific torture
Of bloody guts
Of bloody sluts!

Gore! Gore!
Sacrifice the whore!
Gore! Gore!
I want some more...

When the night fall
I will kill you all
But my desires seem to be nothing more but true
And it will end with the corpse of you...

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NoxDexus 2010-03-18 15:43:38

Cool story, bro.

Montezuma1911 2010-03-18 21:58:25

Yyyyyiiiiiiiiikes.....

Twisted, creepy, and weird... but very well written. Cool POEM, bro.

TheDaemonicPoet 2010-03-18 21:58:25

thanks

daxyplax 2010-03-20 11:00:30

Twisted.. Nice. This is my kinda poem. >:D

TheDaemonicPoet 2010-03-20 11:00:30

Thank you.

daxyplax 2010-03-24 23:32:22

I'm not sure if you remeber, I actually didn't myself, but I was looking at your other posts, and saw comments from me when I was still new here. I was so embarrased to see what I had said to you.
"Wanna be my friend?" I sounded like a fricking 9 year old. Anyway.. Wanna be my friend? Naww... Juuuuust kidding.. :D
I really admire your writing.
:P

TheDaemonicPoet 2010-03-24 23:32:22

I want to be your friend satandammit! D=<

daxyplax 2010-03-25 17:07:39

And I yours.
Hmm.. satandammit..? Interesting.. and agreeable. :D

beastkid7 2010-03-28 19:14:10

Dude-man I love this line

"Why your eyes still shine
As the sun
Making me unapt to face you
Hurting myself for fun"

So good! -check out the peoms I have on my post.

daxyplax 2010-03-29 14:22:07

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"Gore! Gore!
Sacrifice the whore!"
One of mah favorite lines. :P